Additional Scripts
Script 1
"Hey [Name], I was reviewing some recent sales in [Neighborhood/Area], and your home popped into my mind. Homes like yours are selling faster than expected, sometimes over asking price. Curious what yours could go for? Iād love to share some ideas with no strings attached. Whenās a good time to chat?"
Subject Line Ideas:
"Your neighborhoodās on fire (in a good way!)"
"Quick thought about your home in [Neighborhood/Area]"
"Would you take this offer?"
Rhetorical One-Liner: "Have you ever wondered if your home could spark a bidding war?"
Follow-Up: "Hi [Name], I hope my last message didnāt catch you at a bad time. Just wanted to say thereās no pressure hereācuriosity is free! Let me know if youād like to see whatās happening around your neighborhood."
Script 2
"Hey [Name], I was just on Zillow looking for a client and noticed your home. Thought Iād send over a screenshot of what Zillow says your home is worth today. Iāve got a couple of thoughts on itāwhat do you think?"
Subject Line Ideas:
"Zillow had some thoughts about your homeā¦"
"Is Zillow right about your homeās value?"
"Curious about your homeās worth?"
Rhetorical One-Liner: "Is an algorithm really the best judge of your homeās value?"
Follow-Up: "Hey [Name], just circling back! Algorithms like Zillow are fun starting points, but Iāve got insights Zillow canāt see. Let me know if youāre curiousāitās all no pressure!"
Script 3
"Hey [Name], Iāve been hearing a lot of buzz about [Neighborhood/Area] latelyāpeople moving in, some moving out. It got me curious: whatās your experience been like living there? Iād love to hear your perspective."
Subject Line Ideas:
"Your take on [Neighborhood/Area]?"
"Whatās the buzz in [Neighborhood/Area]?"
"Are you feeling the shifts in your neighborhood?"
Rhetorical One-Liner: "What makes a neighborhood feel like home to you?"
Follow-Up: "Hi [Name], Iām sure youāre busy, but Iād genuinely love to hear your take on [Neighborhood/Area]. No strings attachedājust someone whoās curious about whatās happening on your street!"
Script 4
"Hi [Name], Iāve been diving into some trends around [Neighborhood/Area], and it seems like a lot of things are shifting quickly. Have you noticed anything interesting happening around your neighborhood? Thought itād be fun to compare notes!"
Subject Line Ideas:
"Notice the changes in [Neighborhood/Area]?"
"Quick thought on [Neighborhood/Area] trends!"
"Are you seeing what Iām seeing in [Neighborhood/Area]?"
Rhetorical One-Liner: "Does it feel like your neighborhoodās changing by the week?"
Follow-Up: "Hi [Name], just following upāthereās so much happening in [Neighborhood/Area] right now. If youāve noticed anything worth chatting about, Iād love to swap stories or insights!"
Script 5
"Hey [Name], I was looking at some photos of homes in [Neighborhood/Area] recently, and it reminded me how much charm the area has. It got me thinkingāwhat would your next dream home look like if you ever decided to move? Iād love to hear your thoughts and share some ideas if youāre open to it."
Subject Line Ideas:
"Ever thought about your next dream home?"
"Letās dream a little about your future homeā¦"
"Whatās next for you in [Neighborhood/Area]?"
Rhetorical One-Liner: "Have you ever pictured what 'home' might look like five years from now?"
Follow-Up Strategy:
First Follow-Up: "Hi [Name], just circling back on my last message. If youāve ever considered what the next step might look like for your home journey, Iād love to chatāno strings attached, of course!"
Second Follow-Up: "Hey [Name], hope Iām not bothering you! Iāve been seeing some beautiful properties in and around [Neighborhood/Area], and it made me wonder if youāve ever considered whatās possible for you. Let me know if youād like to dream a little!"
Guide for Crafting Scripts
Formula Breakdown:
Personalized Comment: Reference something specific to the recipient (their home, neighborhood trends, or online platforms like Zillow).
Engagement: Ask a simple, open-ended question to prompt thought and encourage interaction.
Curiosity: Use a thought-provoking line or scenario that positions you as interested but not pushy.
Casual Closing: Keep the ending light and open (e.g., āWhenās a good time to talk?ā or āLet me know if this resonates.ā).
Subject Line Strategy:
Evoke Curiosity: "What Zillow wonāt tell you about your home."
Personalization: "Thought about [Neighborhood/Area] lately?"
Exclusive or Intriguing Tone: "Could your home spark a bidding war?"
Relevant Hook: "Hereās what your neighbors are talking aboutā¦"
Follow-Up Strategy
Timing:
First follow-up: 24-48 hours after the initial message.
Second follow-up: 5-7 days after first follow-up.
Final follow-up: 2 weeks later with a light touch.
Tone:
Friendly and non-intrusive.
Restate curiosity and open the door for a response.
Avoid repetitionābring a new angle to each follow-up.
Examples:
Follow-Up 1: "Hi [Name], just wanted to make sure you saw my last message. Iād love to hear your thoughts on [Neighborhood/Area]āno rush, just whenever you have a minute!"
Follow-Up 2: "Hey [Name], I noticed another interesting trend in [Neighborhood/Area] this week. Thought of you again and wanted to shareāhave a quick minute to chat?"
Follow-Up 3: "Hi [Name], Iāll leave you alone after this, I promise! Just wanted to let you know Iām here if you ever want to talk about [Neighborhood/Area] or explore whatās possible for your home."
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